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发表于 2013-1-11 17:35:43 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
诸位大侠:% c+ I0 O6 }' s0 `1 s% b/ U
      小弟经常吹嘘自己在学新概念,怕自己把这事儿说着说着就忘了,现在还在基础阶段,献丑来一段,诸大侠莫笑
+ r+ L, D6 y; W4 G, ^: W5 ]1 o                                                                                         Journey to Baoji. v3 D* x. {* d! e4 A
     As a yong guy who still is interested in playing,how to spend my holiday is a really serious problem for me.As I have little money,the choices for me are very few,I can not afford anything coast much.At the end of last December,I met the problem again,but I am not a guy who does not dare to have a crazy idea.
% Q" [+ o- d  l/ g- rAfter asking a friend comes from Baoji,I got my destation for my holiday,it is Baoji where I would to go .I have several friends there and it is also a city rich in history and the coast would also be little.I am sure it is an ideal place for my vacation.But the most important thing is that I want go there by biycle alone in such a cold winter.
# ?3 f8 q. n  K; f/ q* g! W    With warm clothes,gloves,torch,enough food, drink,and even spare battery,I got my start at the morning of 31th,December,I was sure it would be a wonderful gift for my new year.At my startline,the time is 7:50pm.I did not check any map before my start because I think it is more interseting if I go the way by my own ability.So I went to south along 210 road,the road which took me to one of the higest mountain of Qinling,there were few people on the way that morning, I rade fast for I had past there several times.but there were several trees new planted fell down on the way,the trees were so large that I had to stop to get a new way,they always do thus stupid things for us as we all know.
& R3 A6 M8 @+ s/ H) R, c/ P   After 210 road,I went to west along 107 road,it is a way located at the north of Qingling mountains,I had a good look at of the mountains on my way to west ,there are many scenry spots along the mountin I had visted several in 2012,I can remember all I had done there.When I was riding there was a message came,I read it at my rest point,it read”happy new year”,came from my phone manager who gave me the opportunities to meet Liangwendao and Qulimin this year and I learnt a lot from them,so I sent a message back to her about what I was doing and how beautiful it is to see the smog along this way with the best wishes to her for the new year.After this I went on riding again,the distence from my point to Baoji was still far enough. To my surprise is that there are several long slope,I had to slow down.to save my energy.Several hours later,I arrived a cross,there was a driver who having a rest,I asked him the distence to Baoji from my point,he told me that there is a half,hearing that I was shocked,may I get my destination on time?But all what I can do that moment is keep riding,I can not give up my plan.
6 \% Q- ~* t' _' L' s- Y+ f! t   To avoid worrying much about the trip,I started to linsten music by a nano borrowed from my friend,it is really important to take it easy at such a nervous moment.When I arrived at the way to Taibai,the highest mountain of Qinling,I asked an old man how to get my destination again,he told me there is a distence of 70km left for me and there are few resterants or hotels along the way, it would be a hard way.After eating the food in my bag I turned on my torch,it is dangerous to ride without it in dark.As a happy fool,I can stay calm when I am alone,I can play game with myself just like sid,so I had a good time in my riding,I had a carefully look at of the stars on sky,we can hardly see these beautiful stars in city,you can have a great share of it.
# S( C3 i. ~5 y, d$ P/ v3 _    After 14 hours riding,I got my destation at 10 in night,my friends were waiting me worrily there,one of them laughed”you are a really happy fool”,but all what I wanted that time were food and rest,I was so starve and tired to say any more.8 e8 E* r! G, v
此次旅行从2012.12.31开始,结束于2013.1.3,共计行程400公里左右,单人单车,收获如下:+ O8 {; g+ a1 o( }
            1.        伯努利方程貌似对卡车也有效——俺在宝中线返程时身旁有重型卡车有高速通过,俺感到了股强烈的气流,吹得俺都有摆动,然后俺真的明白火车站那道线的意义…
/ [+ Y! i0 ~8 t; W& g( ]            2.        冲锋衣PU涂层真的透气——俺返程后发现背包带是湿的,而外套却是干的,材料真 的很有趣
( R4 @. i! A- ~3 v& L            3.        靠估计不可能一直玩下去——俺朋友的商店吊顶用轻型龙骨,已经有明显塌陷,他们干活没有计算
- ^7 h0 Y7 A4 i! ^) e! W            4.        没文化很可怕——炎帝祠有堵名人题字的墙,但仔细看看发现挺有趣:发展、弘扬、促进、提高,还有一位要尽早完成祖国统一的…俺第一感觉是运动会入场口号
7 l! c* c) p6 d/ s$ k            5.        没追求更可怕——朋友的朋友,2012总共工作两个月(打工,两个月便放弃),不读书、不做事,成天无所事事,住处垃圾堆得跟山似的,听到俺读书的第一句话是“那有啥读的”
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写的不错,我是指那几句汉字!  发表于 2013-1-11 18:36

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发表于 2014-6-11 14:03:24 | 只看该作者
After viewed ur article i found that you're really a happy guy who is lucky to travel there in baoji. Just be noted that there are plenty of typos in ur article. Anyway it's a good one which leave us an amazing impression of  Baoji.
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发表于 2014-6-11 13:57:33 | 只看该作者
错字好多,表示支持。
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发表于 2014-6-9 21:54:53 | 只看该作者
1 i can not afford anything cost much 改为 i can not afford to buy anything cost much。cuz afford means having the fanancial to do something or to buy something.
2 y: w+ J' ]# }( \2 H' m" y4 u- ]2.by the end of the last December. by the end 是固定搭配 。
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! C0 g: |6 ^3 i1 n8 V3.i got the problem again.用 get 或者 have 都行。# }, \" Y8 @4 I! i+ S) X! B
4.by the end of the last December , i got the problem again ,but i am not such someone being afraid of figuring out a crazy idea.没太看懂这句您想表达什么。; V( m% r' B1 U, q- t! O6 U  E
第一段大概就这些小细节 ,您写得很不错 对于初学者来说,孰能生巧加油,另外 在英翻界有句话 就是十句汉译英才能出来一句英译汉 也就是多精读 多翻译 才能纠正中式思维。一点小建议,共勉。
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发表于 2014-6-8 07:38:51 | 只看该作者
Lz had a great spirit which between lines.
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发表于 2014-6-7 23:24:54 | 只看该作者
很不错!
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发表于 2013-5-15 14:40:09 来自手机 | 只看该作者
基础不够好
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发表于 2013-2-1 20:36:46 | 只看该作者
佩服啊   我正在学啊
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发表于 2013-1-31 21:30:10 | 只看该作者
不敢恭维啊,大哥
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发表于 2013-1-15 14:12:05 | 只看该作者
崩溃的英格力士
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